Mise-en-scene video feedback and learner responseđź’•
Mr Halseys Feedback: You’ve taken on a really challenging recreation and managed to deliver a fun, entertaining video. Well done! Focusing on mise-en-scene, the costumes, locations and actor movement/expression are excellent. You’ve captured the feel of the original. I also think the shots are framed well and fit the split-screen element effectively. The first 20 seconds are close to perfect in terms of the editing and split screen. You lose it a little towards the end but it’s a very complex and awkward editing task to keep the two video and audio tracks running simultaneously and still making the conversation make sense. This is a brilliant lesson in editing, never mind mise-en-scene! I’m also impressed you’ve managed the technical issues with PCs crashing to still deliver this work. I think the facial expressions and costumes were as close as it could be which is good, I chose to take on a challenge because everyone else was pretty similar it wa...