Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

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 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the six categories. 

-Research:3

-Music promo concept:4

-Language:4

-Representations:2

-Audience and industry:2

-Delivery:3

Total=18

Comments:

Nice strong opening - clear thought and background to artist which works well.

Clear ideas on genre but perhaps an old definition of R&B rather than what the genre has evolved into?

Again great to see specific songs already chosen for production , shows a clarity in planning.

Technical elements are well thought out and supported by strong image-driven slides. Clear visual plans for both video and point.

Really like the industries context- Independent label aired at women is interesting

Audience-interesting ideas but perhaps needs a little more depth/explanation

Presentation goes back to technical elements - more good points but in terms of structure and presentation its slightly mixed up.

Excellent Q on cultural backgrounds-not answered here but this would be great for the statement of intent

    Similar on genre -need to do the research to be able to discuss this confidently but plenty of opportunity to do this in statement of intent.


2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.
WWW: 
Good concepts of genre 
Well thought out plans
Good merch ideas
Good plans for target audience

EBI:
Need to be more specific about the record label and get the colour scheme more clear.


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept/treatment offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

My presentation will lead to my coursework as I have clear visions which represent my artist effectively. My artist is very girly and sings about her life issues (breakups). My artist is simple yet effective, in my presentation I included a slide which shows a bedroom with fluffy blankets and LED lighting. My bedroom has near enough the same vibe so I already am achieving what I have in mind. My artists costumes are also the same as I included in the presentation. The RnB soul , hip hop genre will be included visually in my video through clothing, lighting and makeup which is also what i included in my presentation. 
 

















































 

























































































































































































































































































































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